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Broken Maiden

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Our father has created us
Our father has loved us
Our father still loves us
Years ago, he created a new game
Soon after, he left us alone
Left us to fight on our own

Father created my five sisters and I
Our skin is made of porcelain
Our clothes are of silk lace
Our purpose is to complete his game
The goal is to reach perfection
In this twisted game of war and deception

This evil game is very twisted
I must fight my own sisters
The goal of the game is to be the last one standing
Whoever is left will become the perfect being
I must win for my father's sake
I will win, and my spirit will not break

I am the first sister of six
My eyes are dark purple, like my mercury lamp
I am the first doll, but I was completed last
My powers are dark and cruel
My lies are very deceiving
I will win with these abilities, I cannot fail
Although, I have fought my fourth sister, the fifth doll, but to no avail

My first sister, the second doll, is too innocent
She is much too pure
She is too weak, and her powers are useless
She will be destroyed soon in this game
She cannot survive in this twisted game of fate
And will soon be beyond the gate

My second and third sisters, the third and fourth dolls
Are the twins of the jade
Both are string-willed, and will be a challenge to defeat
Their powers are strong and very useful
Both have the ability to heal gardens
Their powers will not work efficiently without each other
But if I can get them separated in the void
They can easily be destroyed

My fourth sister… the fifth doll
She is as strong as I
Her blonde hair as radiant as my white hair
Her blue eyes as magnificent as my purple eyes
I cannot admit these things to her…
I hate her so much, but I love and care about her even more
I say this even though we have fought in this evil game many times before

My fifth sister, the sixth and last doll
She is even more innocent than the second
She is still more powerful, but not by much
She was the first to fall victim to this game, and none of us even harmed her
But, we do not die, for we are dolls
Our souls just go far away
And, unless certain requirements are met, never again can we see the light of day

We are six sister maidens
Dolls in this twisted game of perfection
My goal, my purpose in this porcelain shell
Is to make Father happy, by becoming the perfect being
If this dark fate is our meaning
Then I can't wait to see my father's smile gleaming

There is a seventh doll
A doll of pure evil
I refuse to call her my sister
She was not created by our father, but by his apprentice
She might even be stronger than I
And I fear that my sisters might die

The seventh doll invited me for a plan
I accepted, then betrayed her in the end
For a chance to destroy her
As she has destroyed four of my sisters
The fifth doll, my sister of roses, and I both remain
For my defeat, she is to blame

I find my sister struggling with injuries
The seventh is close to finish her off
I will not let her defeat my sister, I must protect her
I stand in front of my sister of roses
I begin to quickly weaken, the seventh's power is too much
I black out and begin to fade away
I feel my sister's tears hit my face
As I lay there in our final embrace
I lied XD I uploaded this way sooner than I thought! So here is the final version! I got rid of "lampe" because not that many people seem to realize that it is the Latin spelling and I am worried that my teacher will think it is a typo and take off points. Tell me what you think, please! Point out typos, improper phrases, and the like. I didn't notice anything, but you guys might. And if you can come up with a better way to say something in there, then tell me! I might use it! MIGHT. Credit for the line, "Dolls in this twisted game of fate" goes to one of my best friends! So I will not rewrite it in any way. But, please tell me your opinions on it so I know what to improve on! Thank you if you read it!
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Tubesock427's avatar
I lost the game so many times in this it hurt my soul..

but otherwise, :iconfacebooklikeplz: